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death whisper

death whisper

Drawing Drawing \ Figure | 07/19/06 @741 | abtin | Comments critiques (7) | Views views (1324)


death whisper
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although temptation to work more was so starang,i didnt go beyond drawing level.
this is the first time i try this kind of digital concept art.painter is used more than photoshop. i hope you like it.
 
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Avatar Daykan

 07/19/06 @760

very nice work!
 
Avatar lyn

 07/19/06 @888

Lovely colours! I think her head should be lolling back a bit more, but apart from that, really love the piece. Looks a bit unfinished though T_T
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 07/19/06 @890

Cool composition! nice style
 
Avatar Alecueous

 07/19/06 @929

Looks very unfinished.
 
eduart

 07/19/06 @947

nice start...welcome on digital
I think you should work a litle bit more at this one.....I think the face of the girl is a bit too much well rendered than the rest of the composition...but you can leave this way....
for the composition I'll give my max 7
 
Animoose

 07/21/06 @168

I think you should continue a bit more. Colors are nice.
 
Avatar Kaduflyer

 07/22/06 @626

I agree with all the above comments...work on this some more.

She looks like she's floating...there is no feeling of her weight on the 'tendrils' holding her...try making at least one of them straighter, like it's bearing her full weight as the others wrap around her.
 
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Avatar Juro

 01/01/70 @529

Concept:

Average

Technical Skill:

Average

Impact/impression:

Average
Pros:
Dynamic picture with some nice anatomy and perspective. Good earthy colours and the girls fac is nice.
Cons:
This is too loose, being loose in art is a good thing but this needs a lot of tightening up to improve the overall effect. Some parts are almost abstract in their looseness. Parts of the vines are almost blending into the backround, it may have been an idea to make these a different colour to bring the forward. Although I like the colours you have used, I think that if you widen the spectrum a little this work would benefit.
Overall opinion/feedback:
Nice work marred slightly by lack of colour variation and a look of being unfinished.
 
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  10/21/1976 (32)
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